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Teen Poetry #9

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madelyn
Member

since 2009-09-03

Posts 172
Purgatory

0 posted 2013-07-23 09:35 PM

he says she says it says
they all say
that she is
a little
liar
with a
bad reputation
for
stealing
what is not hers
but what if
just what if
somewhere along the line
he took her
and stole her
faith
hope
love
he stole
her
youth
and ate it
to feed his dying soul
what if
just what if
he says she says it says
that
she's the one who lied
when
in fact
she is just a victim
of a mans beating heart
and her own
silly
brain

LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

1 posted 2013-08-06 10:29 PM

This is really interesting and really good, I enjoyed it quite a bit despite the sad subject matter. You have talent, the way you use words is different and powerful.

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