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Teen Poetry #9

A Poem to Gayle

Gasken
Junior Member

since 2008-07-12

Posts 20
Cebu, Philippines

0 posted 2009-02-10 12:24 PM

             A Heart that won't Lie

Staring at you makes me feel complete
That it leads me to a fast heartbeat.
Looking into your eyes would struck me down
That even a fish in the water would be drown.

A simple smile on your face would make me satisfied
Like a man that is contented with his lovingly bride.
Thinking of you is not difficult to do
A Heart that won't Lie, Yes! that's true.

I admit that i find birds that could sing me a beautiful song
But until now they couldn't find a right masterpiece and would not last so long.
Finding the right tune for my song is hard to think of
For it needs time and patience to hear it so soft.

Memories of you from the past would still remain in my mind
Reminding my heart to keep it safe and fine.
Forgetting you is not going to happen
For my heart won't lie, everything else were nothin'.


                                    Gasken

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

1 posted 2009-02-10 09:32 PM

this was an interesting piece to read. i liked the idea of the birds. great imagery there.

~ you cant run from yourself ~

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2009-02-11 12:53 PM

I agree. Interesting. I like it though!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

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