Teen Poetry #9 |
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Bella5 New Member
since 2011-06-01
Posts 4 |
i held your hand tight i vowed not to let go we are in this together are you still here? we are walking down the road but your loosing your way im trying to find you but your drifting away i hope you find your way back becuase i need you cause in the end arent we going to jump? |
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madelyn Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172Purgatory |
I liked this poem but I think the title could've been better. "Lovers Leap" maybe? Anyway, good poem M Sadness, like happiness, has its own majestic beauty and must be embraced as a valid emotion, not pushed down as an abnormality. |
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