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Teen Poetry #9
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Bella5
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since 2011-06-01
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0 posted 2011-06-14 05:15 AM

i wouldnt go looking for a gun
but if i was given one
i'd pull the trigger
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madelyn
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1 posted 2011-06-14 11:13 PM

I really like this but maybe you could expand?

Also Dark poetry would be more suitable for this poem.




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Sadness, like happiness, has its own majestic beauty and must be embraced as a valid emotion, not pushed down as an abnormality.
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