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rachel_anubis
Junior Member
since 2011-03-24
Posts 43


0 posted 2011-03-25 02:43 AM



I have a mask,
A mask of porcelain,
A mask to cover my anger,
A mask to hide my pain,
A mask to conceal my hatred,
A mask behind which I bide,
Waiting with baited breath,
Waiting for someone to see through,
Waiting for someone to see my pain,
My anger
My hatred,
Someone to realise I am hurt,
Someone to realise I am furious,
Someone to see my love,
But my mask conceals all,
Except my eyes,
Which burn behind my mask,
My mask of plain,
White,
Porcelain

© Copyright 2011 Rachel Broe - All Rights Reserved
madelyn
Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172
Purgatory
1 posted 2011-03-27 08:39 PM


Good work Rachel! I really enjoyed the poem.

Hope to read more wonderful poetry!
M


Sadness, like happiness, has its own majestic beauty and must be embraced as a valid emotion, not pushed down as an abnormality.

lumina
New Member
since 2011-03-21
Posts 7
california
2 posted 2011-03-27 09:36 PM


this poem inspired me to show my feelings......that must sound strange, but true. really good job!
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