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HopelessRomantic101
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since 2011-02-09
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0 posted 2011-02-09 07:02 PM


Waiting for the day to end,
I daydream, bidding reality adieu.
Looking for the light in the darkness,
Looking for you.

Your smile shines brighter than our sun,
Our sun which watches from Heaven,
Understanding that the consequences of infatuation cannot be undone.

Great rulers have fallen to such emotion,
Overpowered like rowboats in a vast ocean.

This incredible and addicting feeling,
Offers bliss and blessed healing.

Perhaps the only way to truly live:
Running risks; risking disappointment;
Outrageous and insane hopes.
My heart now knows what is meant

When people talk of wanting to speak,
Instead, saying nothing and turning away in shame.
The desire to see you just one last time,
Hoping to hear your voice one more time, just the same.

My soul now knows unending happiness,
Enough that it understands what words cannot address.

© Copyright 2011 Jonathan Wu - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2011-03-27 10:58 PM


Understanding that the consequences of infatuation cannot be undone.

Great rulers have fallen to such emotion,
Overpowered like rowboats in a vast ocean.


This stood out for me. But many amazing thoughts are penned here. Great Work

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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