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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2011-02-20 12:55 PM



I Live Alone

I live alone, in the absence of companionship
Can you find me here in the twilight?
Holding on to my last hope- a face

But no eyes look into mine
No one is there to find my soul’s secrets
Withering, my soul hobbles on

Blank slate, it goes away and I see the sun
But clouds swallow the rays that breed life
Leaving the world in melancholy grey

Can you find me now, in this house of fire?
I slowly burn from self loathing
Will anyone step up and save a soul?

Fingers stilled from the feel of soft keys
Senses abandon ship as the mind anguishes
I live alone, today is just another day

On the black coated walls, they wrote my doom.

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madelyn
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since 2009-09-03
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1 posted 2011-03-07 05:25 AM


Really good. I loved the mental image that it created.

Enjoyed reading this.

M

"If I am an angel paint me with black wings"-Anne Rice

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