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sammy9698
New Member

since 2010-10-16

Posts 5

0 posted 2010-10-16 04:26 PM

When i say those three words,
Its because they are more then words,
They are bigger then you and me.

When i sat those three words,
Its not just to make conversation,
Its to express forever.

When i say those three words,
Its not out of habbit,
Its to remind you of the life you changed.

When i say I LOVE YOU,
Its to show you that you that you are the best thing to ever happen to me.
For those who have all found love

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2011-01-05 07:58 PM

Aww... This is sweet and sincere and absolutely adorable. And since you encourage critiques, I know for myself that spelling errors detract from my objectivity when reading a poem. You wrote "then" twice when it should have been "than", and wrote "sat" once instead of "say". But all in all this was a beautiful first post. Thank you for sharing.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

*tori_rose*
Junior Member

since 2010-10-12

Posts 44
Weber City, VA

2 posted 2011-01-14 11:36 PM

i love it

so adorable but i second the spelling errors, next time before posting read over it. but over all it was great

~*tori*~

Starcitta
Junior Member

since 2011-01-21

Posts 18
WY, USA

3 posted 2011-01-23 11:03 PM

that is sumtin that i wuld encourage to be on a card for valentines day...its sweet nd shows ur other half your deeper feelings...i love it

Amor Y Lagrimas

HopelessRomantic101
Junior Member

since 2011-02-09

Posts 10
Georgia, United States of America

4 posted 2011-02-15 12:54 PM

It's sweet and touching, I'll give you that. As previously stated, spelling counts. So does capitalization.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2011-02-15 08:50 PM

Sammy,

Welcome to Passions! Please, Check your
email for a Very Special Welcome!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

6 posted 2011-02-20 01:23 AM

I love this. I feel we often forget why we say those 3 words. In the words of Snow Patrol "those three words are said too much, but not enough." Welcome to Pip!

-Kate

On the black coated walls, they wrote my doom.

madelyn
Member

since 2009-09-03

Posts 172
Purgatory

7 posted 2011-03-07 05:21 AM

Beautiful poem.

I loved this!

Amazing!

M

"If I am an angel paint me with black wings"-Anne Rice

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