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The Jorney to see death
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The Jorney to see death |
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Mike McGee New Member
since 2011-02-19
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Michaela was my Wife who died age 43, I try to explain the jorney home from Spain to find her in Hospital etc.. As I sit here thinking of you I wonder what I am going to do My love for you grew every day I know this pain will fade away Oh how I miss those big brown eyes And all the time I spent by your side Your loving smile and tender touch Is what I miss so very much! My journey to you was very tough Despite my speed I still got stuck Our boy in tow, whom I couldn’t leave Desperate that I would not succeed Succeed I did, with the help of others Supported emotionally by your Brother The final miles with sunken heart Knowing what I’d find, when I parked I held your hand and opened my heart Is where I thought I ought to start Through misted eyes I looked at you Praying that you could see me too. You slipped away amongst all you loved Everyone giving you their tender love We left your room with broken hearts You laying there, spirit & soul departed The sun came out when we said goodbye And at your service, oh did we cry Our Brucie-boy he made us laugh This made me feel, not quite so sad As your Husband I knew you best Still sorely missed, but laid to rest Your loving smile and tender touch Is still what I miss so very much Two months have passed, life still goes on Imprisoned in Spain I have become Sometime soon I will be free But in my heart you’ll always be!! |
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madelyn Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172Purgatory |
I really liked the lines: "Sometime soon I will be free But in my heart you’ll always be!!" They really moved me because to me it meant that you will be free of the pain and grief of her death but you will never forget her. I think that your poem had a very important message. M Welcome to Pip! "If I am an angel paint me with black wings"-Anne Rice |
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