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Starcitta
Junior Member
since 2011-01-21
Posts 18
WY, USA

0 posted 2011-01-21 06:45 PM



It’s both physical and emotional

This yearning I feel
The pain you’ve inflicted will never heal.

To believe that we met on the Net.
Lived a long-distance love together…

And to this day,
Months after you’ve destroyed my soul,
Our conversations are friendly…

But, you continue to flaunt dirty money,
Women…And everything else a player would do.

Your there, I’m here
But can’t you hear?
The strong beating of my heart
My sobs as I release my pain
The countless un-answered prayers…

All this for you,
Someone who is blinded by thug life.
Who had the nerve to tell me that I
Could not possibly know what love is.

Oh, but I do
I feel it in the depths of my soul.
And as you destroy yourself and me,
My love for you will live for eternity.


Amor Y Lagrimas

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XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2011-01-21 08:18 PM


Great first post, Chica. You have got talent so I hope we see you here often.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Nareena
Member
since 2011-02-17
Posts 51
BC, Canada
2 posted 2011-02-17 02:27 PM


I've been there... I promise, it DOES get better.
Starcitta
Junior Member
since 2011-01-21
Posts 18
WY, USA
3 posted 2011-02-19 01:56 PM


thats what many people have said...but its unbearable when the person you love unconditionally, could care less if you were dead or alive..Even after they had the nerve to say over and over again that they would never hurt you. It sucks to fall in love with someone who acts as if they have no heart.

Amor Y Lagrimas

khadidja
Junior Member
since 2010-12-03
Posts 16

4 posted 2011-02-19 05:09 PM


I know

Love is nothing like what we hear about
but don't let it destroy ur pure feelings
love suppose to be wonderful
I know exactly the feeling when your farytale appear that is Just a teenage dreams
just a stupid remantic girl dreaming to be a princess

  But let us keep dreaming till we found it
and it'll be wonderful it'll be flawless
and we'll love it

          Keep going!!

Starcitta
Junior Member
since 2011-01-21
Posts 18
WY, USA
5 posted 2011-02-20 11:35 AM


I'll keep going, altho its the hardest thing to do, but i will.. Thx

Amor Y Lagrimas

madelyn
Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172
Purgatory
6 posted 2011-03-07 05:32 AM


Really good poem.

I hope to see more poems of this standard.


M

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