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why you can't love me
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why you can't love me |
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khadidja Junior Member
since 2010-12-03
Posts 16 |
he can't love me **************************************** I'm sorry I can't love you You're too nice You should've fight You shouldn't have say I'm right You should've tell me how great you are a million You shouldn't have be in my side You shouldn't have believed me when I lied You shouldn't have chatted with me You shouldn't have opened your heart for me You should've talk a lot You should've get what I don’t got You shouldnt've been you So I could Love you |
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HolsJoscelyne Junior Member
since 2011-04-05
Posts 23Colchester, United Kingdom |
interesting, I'd ask you to atleast go over this or get the grammar checked out so that we understand a 100% what you're trying to express. But I suppose it's about what you wanted in a lover that he gave but you couldn't return? Good start, good luck! Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com |
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