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I'm Not Okay
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I'm Not Okay |
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FloraScars Junior Member
since 2010-11-08
Posts 33VA, USA |
I'm falling apart as days go by Everyday lying to your face No matter how hard I try I can't keep up with the pace Nothing makes sense My thoughts are a mess Every time you touch me I get tense This is becoming too much stress What use to be my life Is now becoming my fear Your love is becoming a knife I'm afraid the time is near You're asking if I'm alright I answer, but don't look you in the eyes I can't even sleep at night Knowing I'm about to make you cry I stand before you in the rain If I say the words, I think I might dye This is the biggest pain I kiss your lips and murmur goodbye |
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madelyn Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172Purgatory |
This poem really made me feel. Good poem. M "If I am an angel paint me with black wings"-Anne Rice |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Excellent emotion tweaker for sure. Lots of continuous thoughts conveyed without becoming distracted. Beautiful. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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