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I Want To Be On The Inside
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I Want To Be On The Inside |
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madelyn Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172Purgatory |
I want to be on the inside Watching everybody want to be me I want to be on the inside Flaunting my beauty and grace To all those on the outside I want to be on the inside Smiling all through my charmed life I want to be on the inside Popular, pretty and brainy I want to be on the inside Looking out at all the Poor Miserable Dumb Girls I want to be on the inside looking out Not on the outside looking in "If I am an angel paint me with black wings"-Anne Rice |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
When I see excellent writing from a person I tend to expect it from most of their writing from then on. This does not disappoint. I like the way it's been written and presented. Even the black ink and the choice of font serves the purpose perfectly. It adds to the entire feel and mood of this piece. Great work. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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