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Three Words, Three Lies
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Three Words, Three Lies |
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madelyn Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172Purgatory |
Not my best work but it came to mind after listening to a song. Enjoy ***** I love you Three solid lies I You weren’t who you made yourself Out to be You lied to me about who you were LOVE You told me you loved me Forever and always Until the day our hearts stopped beating You lied to me You never had a heart YOU Me, A simple mistake I never really showed you the real me I was too afraid to get hurt… Looks like I was right after all. Three solid lies, That led to my hearts demise. "If I am an angel paint me with black wings"-Anne Rice |
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Starcitta Junior Member
since 2011-01-21
Posts 18WY, USA |
...even tho u said that wasn' ur best work, i loved it, litterally i jus don' know what to say...If u ever have something to say to someone who hurt you, that would sum it up exactly...Gosh i wish he could understand things like this, anyways bravo  Amor Y Lagrimas |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I fail to perceive anything lacking about this poem than from any other by your pen. I think this piece is precisely what it needs to be, so I say good work and keep them coming. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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