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khadidja
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since 2010-12-03
Posts 16


0 posted 2011-01-06 02:54 PM



how am I suppose to live in a world
where I always realise and knew
that dreams never come true
how am I suppose to live in a world
children have been killed on after the other
people cheat on each other
how am I suppose to live in a world
where love doesnt last
relationship end fast
how am I suppose to live in a world
where I feel a lot of pain and fear
when all my work disappear
how am I suppose to live in a world
stucking always at the wrong choise
all lucky girls find lucky boys
how am I suppose to live in a world
where love doesnt exist
it's always that I always felt
it's in taylor song
u feel like everything getting wrong
   I wanna scream and chout
    but nothing we say gonna save us from the fall out
    
11 I hate this number
  my dream was much prettier and bigger
  the day drag on and I always wonder

  WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH THIS WORLD?

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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
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1 posted 2011-01-16 11:31 PM


There is a similar poem/vent by Madelyn that asks much the same as this does here. I always congratulate a keen social awareness in teens and young adults because it shows the willingness not to simply accept things as they are. In your personal fight against that which you see as wrong, do not believe that you are alone. There is hope.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

khadidja
Junior Member
since 2010-12-03
Posts 16

2 posted 2011-01-26 02:14 PM


thank u very much for ur answer

sometimes u just get tierd of living with guilt, fear that every thing u do is wrong
  Sometimes u give up in fights because u knew you'll lose
   Sometimes u just get sick of it

     God help us all

thanks again

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