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UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

0 posted 2009-09-24 05:06 PM

I'm sitting here in silence
and looking at the sky.
Promising and vowing that
tomorrow I won't lie.

That I won't deceive them
and take them for a spin
with my stupid need to hide
behind that godforsaken grin.

I'm so tired of being
the girl that never cries.
The one that's always happy
behind her pain-filled eyes.

So I'm vowing now to tell the truth
still knowing all the while,
when morning comes I'll meet my fate
with that godforsaken smile.

[This message has been edited by UNTAMEDelegance (09-25-2009 11:01 AM).]

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2009-09-24 09:19 PM

You have no idea how much i feel like this right now.. Right now i'm crying.. but i know as soon as i see somebody walking towards the front door I'll stop crying.. i'll smile i'll be nice.. I'll be the girl everybody loves.. But when they go again the pain just gets a little to much to bare.. and i'll cry again..

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2009-09-26 03:20 PM

i think everyone goes through this at one point of time.. love the feeling portrayed in this poem
K

nehematala
Member

since 2009-05-21

Posts 129

3 posted 2009-10-21 05:17 PM

Haylee labeled me as the one that always smiles and I realized how true that is... even with every thing going on right now I'm still smiling...
just remember you don't have to hide behind that smile around me I can see right through it

Loves
Michy

WanderingWillow
New Member

since 2010-08-28

Posts 4

4 posted 2010-08-28 10:31 PM

Michy, you are always smiling, and I admire that so much, the both of you.

*tori_rose*
Junior Member

since 2010-10-12

Posts 44
Weber City, VA

5 posted 2010-10-13 11:57 AM

i know exactly how that goes oh to well. i am like that myself i keep all of my feelings inside untill no one is around i have so many things going through my head that no one knows about i will help freinds when they cry but have yet to learn how to show my own feelings ......

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

6 posted 2010-11-02 04:31 PM

So much emotion in this piece. D#$@ that smile eh? Enjoyed This.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

animecrazy71
Junior Member

since 2010-10-01

Posts 16
Pakistan

7 posted 2010-11-02 06:15 PM

A very beautiful poem i really liked it, i could feel what you were going through...

Check out my Poetry Blog for interesting Poems on http://arslan-poetry-blog.blogspot.com

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

8 posted 2011-01-05 09:19 PM

Beautiful and very telling. I love your natural excellence.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

9 posted 2011-01-05 10:36 PM

Hmm... Thought I commented on this one. Anyway, it's superb!

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

FloraScars
Junior Member

since 2010-11-08

Posts 33
VA, USA

10 posted 2011-03-08 03:48 PM

this poem is great. its probably how many feel.
i know its how i tend to feel
the one who never cries.
the one who seems to always be happy because you hide your pain with a smirk.
yeah i do that alot. i think many of us do.

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