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GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

0 posted 2009-02-04 10:25 PM

Many words reach my ears
telling unwritten tales of dread,
becoming the static of my fears.

You ran to me for everything.
At the finale I ran with fright,
turning from your love; fleeing.

Really it never would’ve worked
I’m scared to get too close
My heart so many times was jerked

Apologizing doesn’t cure heartbreak
Only the clock ticking may help.
But I am sorry for what you must take
Forgive me please for love so fake.

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2009-02-04 10:36 PM

"Forgive me please for love so fake."

Omg i felt the same way about 2 monthes ago with my ex, the last line sums it all up for me.

Really nice poem!!!

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

gdcod2player
Member

since 2008-07-26

Posts 117

2 posted 2009-02-04 11:34 PM

Very nice
i like the last line
it says so much
ill read again

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2009-02-05 09:24 AM

Ahhh!!! Library, library, library!! hehehe. This poem I could connect very well. Great job!!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

4 posted 2009-02-05 04:59 PM

i really loved this. it was beautifully written.
library

?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

5 posted 2009-02-12 02:37 AM

"Apologizing doesn't cure heartache"
*Sigh* if only this weren't true. Lol, great job.

There is power in the pen.

pandabear
Junior Member

since 2009-03-08

Posts 36

6 posted 2009-03-08 11:13 PM

really really good poem it reminds me of my ex in a way but anyways really good keep writing

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

7 posted 2009-03-09 07:58 AM

GREAT JOB...

Amazingly written..

P.S... I saw your comment on another poem belonging to another member.. I LOVE YOUR HONESTY!

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

8 posted 2009-03-09 08:21 AM

Thanks Jess

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