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Darkness |
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daddysgurlxx5xx New Member
since 2009-03-08
Posts 8 |
In the darkness their my love lies the streets that once glittered with gold, now are just dusty, forgotton, ad cold You disappeared from the light came and went with out a fight you were my angel and everything i've ever needed into the darkness the shadows once stood my love for you once was true but it faded away, into the blue Darkness i am. Light i was, my love for was strong faded away into darkness found out it was nothing but lies |
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pandabear Junior Member
since 2009-03-08
Posts 36 |
that was really good |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
You have talent I'll say that much. I enjoyed the way you dfescribed certain things. |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
I really like this and welcome to Pip. With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life. |
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