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winter nights |
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*tori_rose* Junior Member
since 2010-10-12
Posts 44Weber City, VA |
the moon, shines bright out into the night the air, cold and crisp the wind, blowing calmly through the trees the ground, icy yet soft from the new fallen snow you can hear, the animals moving through the night you can see, the bare trees as you walk through the moon lit forest you can feel, the night air upon your face you can smell, the wood burning from the near by homes ~*tori*~ |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I'm no poetry mechanic, just an occasionally fortunate amateur who knows wonderful writing when I see it. This is sooooooo awesome! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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*tori_rose* Junior Member
since 2010-10-12
Posts 44Weber City, VA |
thank you  after writing this i was so happy reading it back to myself and feeling like i was there ~*tori*~ |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I understand exactly what you mean. This evokes a most wonderful wintry feel without the icicles dangling from one's nose! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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