you will always have a place in my heart

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Teen Poetry #9

you will always have a place in my heart

*tori_rose*
Junior Member

since 2010-10-12

Posts 44
Weber City, VA

0 posted 2011-01-07 12:31 PM

this is a poem to my great grandmother who passed 2 years ago on 4th of july, she is missed dearly.
If love alone could have saved you
you never would have passed.

In life i loved you dearly;
in death i love you still.

In my heart you hold a place
no other could ever fill.

If tears could build stairways,
an heartache make a lane,
i'd walk the path to heaven
and bring you back agian.

our family chain is broken,
and nothing seems the same,
byt God calls us one by one,
the cain will link again soon enough.

~*tori*~

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2011-01-07 01:41 PM

This is an absolutely beautiful and fitting tribute!

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

*tori_rose*
Junior Member

since 2010-10-12

Posts 44
Weber City, VA

2 posted 2011-01-07 06:38 PM

thank you very much for your feed back on my poems im glad you like them

~*tori*~

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

3 posted 2011-01-07 07:12 PM

No problem at all. If I love anything about the written art, it's the simple, expressive, honest and emotive poetry that I find in here. Thank you for sharing!

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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