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Teen Poetry #9

distance in love

*tori_rose*
Junior Member

since 2010-10-12

Posts 44
Weber City, VA

0 posted 2011-01-08 06:40 PM

you look in to his eys

he smiles,
thats all it took you are now hooked

you hug and you tell yourself you arent going to get attached.

then all everytime you pull back from his hugs you realize you want more you want to feel your lips on his.

you almost have before but you stoped yourself because you know you cant be with him

so you hug and go your seprate ways.

or atleast you thought you left him,
until you realize that he is all you can think about.

you wish you could see him but distance stands in the way.

you cant help but feel you have fell for someone you could never have.

but yet u pray that one day soon he will show up and you will be back in his arms again.

~*tori*~

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2011-01-12 12:35 PM

Absolutely lovely. These simple sentiments about a difficult love are as stirring as grand and eloquent poetry.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Starcitta
Junior Member

since 2011-01-21

Posts 18
WY, USA

2 posted 2011-01-22 09:26 PM

this is beautiful, and real..I can see myself in that place, loving someone so far away. It's a feeling many people experience, hard isn't it? Cuz all we hav is hope, great job, hope to read more

Amor Y Lagrimas

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