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rebelrea
Junior Member
since 2010-10-22
Posts 20
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2010-10-24 04:07 PM


I actually wrote this around 7th grade XD, but that doesn't mean it wasn't true....


You say I love you, but do you mean it?
It makes me think, should I really believe it?
You say that I change you
but I don’t think I really do
I’m supposed to be your girl
apparently you whole world
 
But aren’t you just playing me
like with every other one you called baby?
Your just the same as every other guy
the ones I couldn’t stand to call mine
Mean, over controlling freaks
who think us “perfect” girls need tweaks
 
I won’t walk to your house everyday
no matter what you try to say
I won’t hold your hand
just to upset someone you can’t stand
I won’t hug you when you leave
just so you can try to believe
all the lies you’ve been telling me
 
You say I love you, but you don’t mean it
I never should have thought if I believe it
You never really changed
your always the same
And if I ever did say it back, I love you
then I would be lying too

~RMB~

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Amberzlynnc
Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 229
New Jersey
1 posted 2010-11-02 03:39 AM


I'm very glad to read that you're learning early how to pick out the boys who use those three words with ease.. smart girl!
XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2011-01-05 08:09 PM


I enjoyed the perceptive insight in one so young. But you are an amazing creature after all, aren't you? I commented on your awesome poem in the mains, so this is my second view of your talent. It has only grown, and can only keep growing. Rock on, chica!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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