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UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

0 posted 2010-03-10 07:47 PM

That's what you see
when you look in my eyes.
Broken, recycling,
reusable, right?

I'm just the girl
that you all passed around.
Used and abused
'til the new toy was found.

It's not like you loved me;
I thought that you did.
I really don't know
who I'm trying to kid.

I'm just the pretty,
reusable toy,
the puppet, the prize
for the next charming boy.

The one that will hold me
and quiet my cries.
Sweet, whispered nothings
and cruel, tender lies.

They'll love and hug me
like the "pet" I've become,
then throw me away
when they're done with the fun.

The boys that suround me,
each one is the same;
they all want their "brag rights,"
they all want a claim.

Because of their "loving,"
because of their lies
I've learned not to trust them,
to not bat and eye.

I've been beaten and broken
by boy after boy,
I'm the reusable, thrown out,
recyclable toy.

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

1 posted 2010-03-11 12:25 PM

A feeling i know alot about, you worded it all perfectly!!
just loved it

-Lee

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

2 posted 2010-03-11 01:08 AM

Thank you so much. It means a lot to hear positive feedback on my poems! =^.^=
~UNTAMEDelegance

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2010-03-11 12:15 PM

Wow. This is one of your absolute best poems! I really liked how the story flowed very smoothly. Great job!

-Zach

Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters.

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

4 posted 2010-03-11 12:21 PM

I liked this one. Strong emotions without being over the top to much. Nice writing.

Zeitgeist.

WanderingWillow
New Member

since 2010-08-28

Posts 4

5 posted 2010-08-28 09:35 PM

I googled you, I looked you up, I created an account, All because I needed to read this poem again. I had it stuck in my head, and it fits how I feel right now... You are such an amazing artist, and in so many ways. ~That other Gemini girl~ xD

Stitches
Member

since 2009-11-27

Posts 159
United Kingdom

6 posted 2010-09-08 07:49 AM

This is total perfection.

Library for sure.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

*tori_rose*
Junior Member

since 2010-10-12

Posts 44
Weber City, VA

7 posted 2010-10-14 08:26 PM

i understand this poem way to well im sorry to say ...you spoke the truth and it was very good hit close to home with it

~*tori*~

animecrazy71
Junior Member

since 2010-10-01

Posts 16
Pakistan

8 posted 2010-10-16 07:07 AM

very nice. The flow of the poem was smooth....i really liked it

sammy9698
New Member

since 2010-10-16

Posts 5

9 posted 2010-10-16 04:30 PM

I loved it. It flowed great and expressed a lot feelings that i feel. Great job

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

10 posted 2011-01-05 08:23 PM

Once more you have not failed to delight, tantalize, provoke and entertain with the thoughts of your heart. Truly, UNTAMEDelegance.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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