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Teen Poetry #9

Meeting a Friend

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

0 posted 2010-10-05 02:57 AM

Let the bells ring
Let the fools run
Face the shadow
And pray his pardon dear

Let the light rise
As it rose before
As it rises within the breast

What have you
Of this dark stranger
What have you known of love?

Give a word of mem'ry
A simple phrase of joy
And smile at the face of pain
Bow your knee at guilt

May we celebrate together brother
May we sing the songs rejoicing
May we love the words of glory
And have a fairy story

Where the bells ring
And the fools run
Where the shadow smiles bright
And brotherhood resounds

Discipline is remembering what you want.
-David Cambell

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

1 posted 2010-10-05 09:28 PM

An interesting entry that held my interest. Nice work.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2010-11-02 04:29 PM

The Earl responds to the Earl, at first I was wondering why someone would be the first to comment on his own piece, then I took a closer look

"And smile at the face of pain
Bow your knee at guilt"

I like it. Enjoyed this.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2010-11-07 03:30 PM

Frank.. just lovely good to come back and see you're still here posting

Krysti

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

4 posted 2011-01-05 10:32 PM

Aggressive poetry. Love it.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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