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Teen Poetry #9

You can't...

madelyn
Member

since 2009-09-03

Posts 172
Purgatory

0 posted 2010-10-20 12:10 PM

You wanna call out,
But you can’t find your voice.
You wanna cry,
But you can’t find the tears.
You wanna surrender,
But you can’t find the white flag.
You wanna break up,
But you can’t find the courage.
You wanna speak up,
But you can’t find your voice.
You wanna fight back,
But you cant find the strength.
You wanna get out of the dark,
But you can’t find the light.
You wanna stop your heart from loving him,
But he's taken that too.

rebelrea
Junior Member

since 2010-10-22

Posts 20
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2010-10-24 04:03 PM

loved it, great job

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2010-11-02 04:25 PM

Actually you can, But only you could save yourself. Enjoyed this.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

lilly
New Member

since 2010-11-06

Posts 4
Under Your Bed

3 posted 2010-11-06 03:05 AM

that was the...AWESOMEST POEM EVER!!!! I LOVE IT... you should become famous!

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2010-11-07 03:37 PM

loved this!!

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

5 posted 2011-01-05 10:30 PM

Very feisty poem

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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