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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08
Posts 422
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0 posted 2010-07-24 11:59 PM


Hello all, I haven't written anything in a very long time. This came very horribly to me tonight. I saw someone from my past and this all just exploded in my head.
It's not that organized, so ignore that. But yeah, I just needed to get this out there. Thanks


A tiny teardrop falls from my cheek tonight
as I look through photos from the past.
Our lives were like a jigsaw puzzle...
in the end we fit together perfectly.

I see your smile spread across your face
in that perfect way.
My eyes long for that smile now,
but its never again for me.

There was once a time when we were one,
inseperable could be another word to describe.
The bond we had was a true friendship,
until I spilled my honesty to you.

The feelings I had weren't mutual,
and I thought I was over the pain of the truth.
It turns out that the pain was never gone,
just buried beneath the ashes of those photos.

I know you'll never feel for me
the way I longed for you.
There's more I need to tell you,
but I can't find the words.

julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

[This message has been edited by Just.Another.Falling.Star (07-25-2010 12:04 AM).]

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mozart4321
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since 2010-06-29
Posts 29

1 posted 2010-07-25 07:53 PM


this actually brought tears to my eyes.  well written and soooo easy to relate to.
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08
Posts 422
Canada
2 posted 2010-07-25 10:33 PM


Aww, I'm sorry Mozart. But thank you

julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

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