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Teen Poetry #9

I Didn't Know

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

0 posted 2010-06-10 06:06 PM

I didn’t know that I was lost
until you softly found me.
I didn’t know perfection cost
until you then unbound me.

I didn’t know that I was wrong
‘til you staked to correct me.
I didn’t know I wasn’t strong
until you dared perfect me.

I didn’t know I’d gone astray
until you came to guide me.
I didn’t know I’d run away
until you came to hide me.

I didn’t know I was in love
until your eyes befell me.
I didn’t know that I could love
until you gently held me.

Nothing is more painful than realizing he meant everything to you, but you meant nothing to him. (Unknown)

[This message has been edited by UNTAMEDelegance (06-12-2010 11:08 PM).]

toriber
Junior Member

since 2010-06-10

Posts 22
texas

1 posted 2010-06-17 11:51 AM

wow once again u write amazingly good!!!!

id rather be extordinary together rather than ordinary a part

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2010-06-18 01:33 AM

Beautiful!

AlexandriaDixon
New Member

since 2010-06-22

Posts 6

3 posted 2010-06-22 01:43 PM

I didn't know I wasn't strong
until you dared perfect me.

I think this was my favorite line. This was beautifully written.

mozart4321
Junior Member

since 2010-06-29

Posts 29

4 posted 2010-07-01 02:32 PM

very sweet and heartwarming.

with a dash of melancholy.

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