Teen Poetry #9 |
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Not "Us" |
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UNTAMEDelegance Member
since 2009-05-30
Posts 222Oregon |
I slowly come to terms with facts. There is no "our" or "we." There is no "us," no "me and him" and never will there be. I slowly nurse the throbbing loss. It hurts too much to see. I'm blinded 'cause there is no "us" and now it's only me. I slowly stand against the wounds. I'll face this on my own. I don't need them; can't show the pain. I'll bleed and cry alone... [This message has been edited by UNTAMEDelegance (03-27-2010 01:18 PM).] |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
I've been there, it sux. Nice write, though. “All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde |
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UNTAMEDelegance Member
since 2009-05-30
Posts 222Oregon |
Thanks. Goos to know I'm not the only one... ~UNTAMEDelegance Nothing is more painful that realizing he meant everything to you, but you meant nothing to him. (Unknown) |
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nehematala Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 129 |
messa I'll always be there for you when you need to talk |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
...and sadness shall turn to joy when time has passed and she has forgottened the boy who never deserved to be loved gently by the caring girl who dared to walk Out on the limb. My your healing be quick.ww [This message has been edited by whisperingwalt (05-19-2010 03:00 AM).] |
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UNTAMEDelegance Member
since 2009-05-30
Posts 222Oregon |
Thank you. Thank you so much whisperingwalt. You don't know how much it means to me to hear someone say that. It... it's like hearing a waterfall that falls down and washes away the sting of the pain; it's like the aloe vera to my burned heart. Thank you. ~UNTAMEDelegance Nothing is more painful than realizing he meant everything to you, but you meant nothing to him. (Unknown) |
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UNTAMEDelegance Member
since 2009-05-30
Posts 222Oregon |
Michelle, There are some things I need to face alone... Nothing is more painful than realizing he meant everything to you, but you meant nothing to him. (Unknown) |
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toriber Junior Member
since 2010-06-10
Posts 22texas |
wow iv totally been there i hope everything turns out good for you!! id rather be extordinary together rather than ordinary a part |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
DANGGIT! Man this was good Loved it!! |
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UNTAMEDelegance Member
since 2009-05-30
Posts 222Oregon |
Thank you! =^.^= ~UNTAMEDelegance Nothing is more painful than realizing he meant everything to you, but you meant nothing to him. (Unknown) |
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mozart4321 Junior Member
since 2010-06-29
Posts 29 |
wow. ![]() |
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