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LittleWillow
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since 2007-12-27
Posts 54


0 posted 2010-03-13 08:18 PM


Heyy! Havent been on for SO long! Many reasons! But back!
Heres one for you, any tips would be great!
Thanks!

My Sister Gracie.

She is so tiny to me, with rosey cheeks and big blue eyes.
With bonde swpet hair and a chocolate face.
I'd never find anyone to replace.
As i wipe the chocolate from her cheeks.
I gently plant my finger on her nose.
Give her a smile and let her go.

As i hear her bound off for her toys.
It makes me smile, for she will never know.
Just how much she means to me.
I'll never forget when she was a baby.

She will soon grow, more quickly then i know.
Sometimes i wonder what she will be.
& i grin from ear to ear cos she could never dissappoint me.

I can now hear her, playing and messing around.
Having more fun, then i could ever understand.
She is so entertained by such little things.
I cant wait for her to come to me for girly things.
Make-up and clothes it will soon be.

I'll stand there for a while talking to my mother.
Listening to how i was so much apparantly like her. How much we love her and never want her to change. Time goes by so quicky, and she will grow.
All the things she will probably do, all the things i never had a chance to.

Still holding the chocolate smeared cloth and simply remember, ill have to cherish everything forever.
But for the next couple of seconds just wondering
and pondering to myself just how she got the chocolate in her hair and that on its own makes me smile.

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Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
1 posted 2010-03-17 03:42 AM


I enjoyed your poem about your sister.  Thank you.
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