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kjsd
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0 posted 2010-03-13 04:44 PM



i love my guy

i love my guy
he is so sweet
i love my guy and
he loves me
i love my guy
he is the best
i love my guy
he is mine
nobody can take him
he belongs with me
he wont let anybody take him
he loves me
i love my guy
he is so sweet
i love my guy and
he loves me
i love my guy
he is the best
i love my guy
he is mine


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Stitches
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1 posted 2010-03-22 05:47 AM


The repetition really conveys a sense of obsession.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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2 posted 2010-03-22 12:54 PM


Young love does not know the boundaries of obsession and extremely likeness.
kjsd
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3 posted 2010-03-31 06:55 PM


i did not mean to be like that i was just expersing my fellings of that time

kjsd
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4 posted 2010-04-02 02:57 PM


i wish i could take all my poems out because he dumped me

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