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Vulpine
Junior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 20
Minnesota

0 posted 2010-11-22 10:32 PM


Something is there
Something is waiting for me
In the darkest part of my imagination
I need to lock it away with the key

Only if I knew where it was
I could be set free
But something is
Still clinging on to me

Something evil
Suggesting something bad
Oh make it stop
I think I’m going mad

I would never do it
But sadly I know someone
Someone sweet but insecure
Some kids they did shun

Someone who loved to help
Someone who was so very kind
Someone who lost their voice
Deep inside their mind

Someone who hid
Behind their smile
Someone who could never
Stay awhile

She was never helped
She was never saved
But now she resides
With God all day
For God took pity
On her poor little soul
Now she gives console
To the boys and girls in need
To lead them to a better path not the one she took indeed

I am simply me and not what you want me to be.

© Copyright 2010 Emi B. Opheim - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2011-01-05 09:12 PM


I am personally very pleased with the beautiful ending. But half the getting there was the beginning and middle and it was a fantastic trip all the way.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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