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Teen Poetry #9

All alone

MadMarcus
Junior Member

since 2009-11-25

Posts 25
Sweden, Solna

0 posted 2010-03-10 01:06 PM

Sitting here in the classroom.

Looking at all the empty chairs.

I hear the echos of the laughter.

The sounds of play.

Feeling the warmth of another.

Then reality takes hold on me again and...

I feel cold...

I feel deaf & blind...

I´m alone...

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2010-03-10 05:15 PM

Nice write, I really like it.
I know that feeling well.
This will go into my library I think.

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2010-03-10 09:47 PM

God dag Jag ser din från Sverige. Ledsen om min Svensk är bort. Utom jag verkligen likt din dikt. Dess en smula enkel ändå. Kanske något mer öva sig? Brunn Jag hoppa det din brunn.

Welcome to Pip!
-Zach

(Sorry if my Swedish is really bad. I'm learning it and I'm not doing too well with writing in Swedish. Lol)

Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters.

MadMarcus
Junior Member

since 2009-11-25

Posts 25
Sweden, Solna

3 posted 2010-03-14 08:15 PM

Thanks for the nice comments^^

And Zach ^^ I´m not that new on Pip, i actully posted some things before... Just some months ago. And this was more of a... Thign i wrote and just wanted to share with someone. But still thank you very much <3 And your swedish is actually really good ^^ Just some grammar issues.

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