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Teen Poetry #9

Only you can help

Marine4life
New Member

since 2010-02-28

Posts 5

0 posted 2010-02-28 02:00 AM

Only you can help

To rid my life of fear
To rid my life of hate
to ride my life of fear
so I can open up that gate.

Only you can help

To rid my life of all thats bad
To rid my life of sin
To rid my life of all thats bad
so at least I don't give in.

Only you can help

To stop the tears I cry
that spill beyond the brink
To stop the tears I cry
that flow in crimson ink.

Only you can help

For what I want the most
is what I'll never reach
for what I want the most
That you could only teach.

Only you can help

To show me how to love
Or to show me how to feel
To show me how to love
so at least my love is real.

i threw this together in about 20 mins let me know if you like it or if theirs any thing i can do to improve it

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2010-03-01 11:40 PM

Nice write. I used to feel the same way. Trust me, it's not necessarily a bad place to be.

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EmilyTheStrange
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I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

2 posted 2010-03-02 03:20 PM

Only you can help

To rid my life of fear
To rid my life of hate
to ride my life of fear
so I can open up that gate.

I really liked this. It's amazing for you to have written it in 20 minutes. You definitely have talent

Do you really love me? Or should i just let go now??

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