Teen Poetry #9 |
Only you can help |
Marine4life New Member
since 2010-02-28
Posts 5 |
Only you can help To rid my life of fear To rid my life of hate to ride my life of fear so I can open up that gate. Only you can help To rid my life of all thats bad To rid my life of sin To rid my life of all thats bad so at least I don't give in. Only you can help To stop the tears I cry that spill beyond the brink To stop the tears I cry that flow in crimson ink. Only you can help For what I want the most is what I'll never reach for what I want the most That you could only teach. Only you can help To show me how to love Or to show me how to feel To show me how to love so at least my love is real. i threw this together in about 20 mins let me know if you like it or if theirs any thing i can do to improve it
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Nice write. I used to feel the same way. Trust me, it's not necessarily a bad place to be. {~~*~~} EmilyTheStrange |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
Only you can help To rid my life of fear To rid my life of hate to ride my life of fear so I can open up that gate. I really liked this. It's amazing for you to have written it in 20 minutes. You definitely have talent Do you really love me? Or should i just let go now?? |
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