stuck between these voices

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Teen Poetry #9

stuck between these voices

LOSTinTHISworld
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

0 posted 2010-02-04 09:28 PM

theres a girl inside of me
and she's fighting, begging me
to hold on, don't let go
she's the girl
who cries out loud
the girl who asks for help
she's scared
but she knows your there

theres a girl inside of me
and she's dying, begging me
the let go, don't hold on
she's the girl
who shuts you out
the girl who destroys herself
she's not scared
and she doesn't care

here i am stuck
between these voices
they've taken over me
who do i trust
do i keep fighting
not knowing where it will take me
or do i let go hoping
i could be free at last

theres a girl inside of me
and she's hiding
but she needs you to see
she's not leaving, its not time

theres a girl inside of me
and she's angry
and she needs you to see
she's ready, to say goodbye

here i am stuck
between these voices
they've taken over me
who do i trust
do i keep fighting
not knowing where it will take me
or do i let go hoping
i could be free at last

theres a girl inside of me
and she's hiding
but she needs you to see
i'm not going anywhere
i will keep fighting
not knowinng where it will take me
i won't let go not knowing
if i could be free

memento mori

Marine4life
New Member

since 2010-02-28

Posts 5

1 posted 2010-02-28 02:09 AM

this is really good i can strongly realtate to what your saying about having another side that your not sure if you should show but keep up th e good work

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2010-02-28 10:28 AM

Wow. I can't even think of anything to say except that this is amazing and it is going in my library.
Fantastic write,

{~~*~~}

p.s. I really like the title.

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

3 posted 2010-03-02 03:23 PM

Love this

Do you really love me? Or should i just let go now??

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