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| Teen Poetry #9 |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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Inspired by Alice in Wonderland and All Time Low's newest song. <3 --------------------------------------------------- I'm spinning, twirling through the air What a funny way to fall Find a way and loose myself Give into my senses; release it all In a world where reality is upside down I'll wake up but the dream isn't done If nothing here is true Then I know the battle hasn't been won I'll play my cards and make it out Of this world inside my head |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
i really liked the tone of this one, it was fun and lighthearted, even though the subject at hand wasn't so fun. I dont think that makes sense but i really enjoyed this one -Lee |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Zach, I really like this. The title is perfect too. You have grown so much as a poet. When I was a kid - my nickname was ... Alison Wonderland (hated it) |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
PS - I think it makes a lot of sense to any Alice in Wonderland fan. Good writing. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Lee, I was kinda going for that light-hearted/serious tone. Alice in the story is lost in a unknown world. (I would be terrified to say the least) But she realizes that its all fun and games here (to a sense.) So I was trying to write like that. Thanks for reading.  Ali, Thanks! I guess when you grow up writing. Your work grows too. Haha. I was trying really hard to write the story while writing the words I thought. Haha. |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Wonderful write! It's something I could read over and over again. “All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde |
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