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Rediculus
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since 2009-02-12
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0 posted 2009-02-12 02:15 PM



I don’t know where this comes from
This confusion in my head
Leading me down stairs well traveled to halls lightly tread upon
To the wild calling place
The place where your memory lives
The place of 10,000 pains and 1 smile
The place of 2 million tears from a dry eye
The place where snow melts and the sun sets
That place
I don’t know why your smile still haunts my steps
Dreaming and waking your laugh still rings in my ears
Taunting me
Teasing my memories
Leading me down these stairs
Through these halls
2 this place
This secret place
This place of two hour orgasms and flaccid erections
This place of flailing fists and hands raised in protection
This place of warm embraces and cold words
Of sneaking in the night to see if U are sleeping alone
This place exists in and outside of me, deep in my heart and wide across the globe, this
place  belongs to you & I gave it willingly by deception
So I travel down the steps through the halls to the place and I realize                  
This used to be home.

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nina1522
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since 2009-02-14
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1 posted 2009-02-14 10:30 PM


wow very powerful. Truly well written
Rediculus
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since 2009-02-12
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2 posted 2009-02-15 12:32 PM


thank you.
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