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david3
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since 2013-03-02
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0 posted 2013-03-06 11:33 PM



Love Lost

If there exists the best for every soul,
The perfect compliment of moon to sun
And finding her is yet a valiant goal,
I searched and found my one, my only one.

As sure as petals glisten fraught with dew
And sunlight makes a crystal shine and dance,
Our hearts were bound and love was found we knew
As eyes secured a bond with but a glance.

We loved awhile but life was far from kind,
When I alone destroyed what might have been.
While happiness and hope were left behind,
For love is just a fallacy of men.

To dream of love is painful at its best,
But so I must each night with every rest.

© Copyright 2013 David William La Belle - All Rights Reserved
LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
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1 posted 2013-03-07 11:22 PM


This is really interesting, I like it quite a bit. It is an interesting way of wording it and that added a new level to your meaning. Enjoyed
Temptress
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2 posted 2020-06-02 08:16 AM


Dreaming of love can be painful, but somehow seems to fuel hope at the same time. It's a twin edge at times. I also think it's rare that only one person has a hand in destroying it.

I like the short and the rhythm here.


"Maybe that's the way I should go
Straight into the mouth of the unknown"

Shinedown

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