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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
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Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2012-01-14 01:24 AM


A billion stars
Are what I see
Blasting through
This galaxy
As I head toward
The singularity

Traversing the depths
Of time and space
I think of you
Your warm embrace
Your gentle touch
I simply can’t replace

With heavy heart
I heave a sigh
Watching light-years
Drifting by
Why did I do this
Now alone I cry

Home with you
I long to be
Not caught in stellar
Majesty
But it seems that fate
Had other plans for me

To turn back now
It’s far too late
The black hole beckons
It won’t wait
These final thoughts
Are all I contemplate

There’s one thing more
I’ve left to do
Across the void
I call to you
My dearest one
Please know my love was true

G. A. Webb
01/13/12


Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't




[This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (01-14-2012 03:56 AM).]

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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2012-02-08 09:33 PM


Full of emotion and regret, I could feel the energy in your words.
G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
2 posted 2012-02-14 02:24 PM


Thank you.

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


Phinity
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since 2012-03-02
Posts 1

3 posted 2012-03-02 07:57 PM


Wow, this is one of my favorite poems for today. It's beautifully described and I'm personally fond of the subject. Keep it up!
arofriend
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since 2012-06-07
Posts 9

4 posted 2012-06-11 12:01 PM


That's really beautiful.  I love the isolation of space as a place in which to talk about something so intimate.
noodles6996
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since 2012-06-16
Posts 7

5 posted 2012-06-16 02:40 AM


I like the rhythm, the flames of love turn the wheel of poetry eh?
Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2012-07-13 01:27 PM


Ohhh my you have me weeping..can hardly see to type.
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