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G. A. Webb
Member

since 2000-01-21

Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2011-04-30 01:27 PM

I’m the paper cut you get at work
The break that’s in your arm
I’m the stealthy stalking killer
Intent on doing you harm
I’m the roof that’s falling in on you
Amidst the driving rain
You know exactly who I am
You know me
I am pain

I’m the lies of the lovers
That you’ve ever been told
I’m the long sleepless nights
Of isolation and cold
I’m the thoughts that always haunt you
Until you’ve gone insane
Don’t you try to walk away
You know me
I am pain

I’m the screams of the baby
Calling for his mother
I’m the fly on the face
Of your dead rotting brother
I’m the scars of your soul
Which have left such a stain
I will never leave you
You know me
I am pain

G. A. Webb
04/30/11

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

[This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (05-02-2011 09:55 PM).]

LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

1 posted 2011-04-30 02:37 PM

AMAZING! This is my favorite poem I have read in the longest time. I am speechless. Wow, I love love love your poem!

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

2 posted 2011-04-30 03:09 PM

looooove it

its very goood

G. A. Webb
Member

since 2000-01-21

Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

3 posted 2011-05-02 04:20 AM

Thank you both, I'm glad you liked this piece.

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

Haf_Alive
Member

since 2011-09-04

Posts 56
High in the Sky

4 posted 2011-09-05 02:22 PM

this style i great. just enough rhymes to make it flow really well. great depiction of that unavoidabl element in our lives... pain. thanks

HAF

ponderthepoetorrsx
Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

5 posted 2011-09-05 04:57 PM

great

rachel_anubis
Junior Member

since 2011-03-24

Posts 43

6 posted 2011-09-08 01:33 AM

I really enjoyed this poem and the rhythm of the lines

G. A. Webb
Member

since 2000-01-21

Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

7 posted 2012-01-28 03:53 AM

I'm glad you all liked it, this was yet another bunch of words that kept my up one night until I put pen to paper, thank you very much.

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

arofriend
New Member

since 2012-06-07

Posts 9

8 posted 2012-07-02 10:24 PM

That was a cool poem. Neat to explore what pain might say if it were able to speak.

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

9 posted 2012-07-13 01:25 PM

Bravo my friend!! But stay away...I really don't like you very much.

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