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maddorani
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0 posted 2011-12-11 05:26 PM


Why do you say I don’t know anything?
When I do!
Why do you think I don’t know anything?
When I do!
Tell me!?
Is it because I look innocent?
Is it because I am locked up in a cage?
Is it because I’m young?
Tell me…?-
Why do you keep on thinking that?
Why do you keep on saying that?
Should I prove it to you?
That I know!-
In this world
There is poverty.
People are dying in wars
Crime is spreading throughout the areas.
Gas prices are unbelievable
Because of what happened in Libya.
There is corruption
Lying, deceit, and betrayal going on.
Everyone is getting greedy for the money.
There was a shooting at Virginia tech.
In Pakistani dramas girls are more modernized/westernized
Same with Bollywood movies.-
Now let me talk about the natural disasters
There was a tsunami in Japan
There were tornadoes in Joplin
This world is in a mess.
There are natural disasters in every corner of the world!-
Now tell me!
Do you still think that I don’t know anything?
Do you….?
Because I think you are the one
That doesn’t know anything!-
I have experienced life like you did!
I have experienced things too?!-
I talked about the world now lets talk about me…!
Do you know how much I suffer every night?
Do you know how much I’m traumatized?-
I get freaky dreams at night!
I am scared of other people…
I am scared of trusting others…
Because of what happened.
I am horrified of everything
I think about others of what
They would think about me!
I wish I can live in peace
But I can’t!
Do you know how difficult it is for me?
Do…you?
There words were stinging my heart
And still do!
I always keep my feelings locked up inside!
I always keep my secrets hidden!
Do you think that’s easy?
Do you think that’s difficult?
Because there are some people
That can’t even hide their feelings
Or hide their secrets.
I also hold back my tears!
I also keep my tears hidden!
Do you think that’s easy?
Do you think that’s difficult?
Because to me it’s easy
But there are some people
That can’t even do that.
I am proud of my self
Of the way I am.
Now tell me
Do you still think that I don’t know anything?
Do you….!
Because I know what life is more than you!


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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
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Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2011-12-27 10:02 AM


Very nice, I felt your rage and anger radiating off your words, full of power.
maddorani
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2 posted 2011-12-27 03:28 PM


thank you hehe i wanted to prove to this person that i know things and that i expereienced life cuz that person always thought i didnt know anything and then thats how i wrote this poem and i got that persons reply on this poem
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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3 posted 2012-01-08 04:01 AM


a powerful write indeed

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

maddorani
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4 posted 2012-01-08 02:57 PM


thank you

i was kind of disappointed that one of my friend who is 6 yrs older than me always thinks that i dont know anything when i doooo so i wrote this poem for him and i sent it to him

G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
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Stanton, California, USA
5 posted 2012-01-15 03:38 PM


This is great. I think everybody feels this way at one point or another in life. I've found that the ones who say others don't know anything are usually dumbasses trying to mask their own ignorance. Good write, thanks for posting.

P.S. If I may ask, what was his response?

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


maddorani
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houston,tx
6 posted 2012-01-15 04:23 PM


is it ok if i email it to you
maddorani
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7 posted 2012-01-15 04:27 PM


i emailed it to u if u don mind that is and thanks for your comment
G. A. Webb
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8 posted 2012-01-15 05:41 PM


You can email me, it's no problem.

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
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houston,tx
9 posted 2012-01-15 06:26 PM


ok i emailed it to u u should chk it out
maddorani
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10 posted 2012-01-15 06:29 PM


i send it to u in an email i hope u chk it out
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