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Here I Am
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Here I Am |
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madelyn Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172Purgatory |
Here I am Standing next to them Wondering why They even try To be perfect When all they do is get wrecked Pure white Before the fight Now they are stained red All their innocence is dead Here I stand With a brand Saying I am his and his alone Yeah, he’s the King Bee and I’m his Drone Don’t know why I wish to fly When I can’t even walk When I can’t even talk Without him telling me to Without him giving me the cue Pure white Before the fight Now we are stained red All of our innocence is dead You could call me a fool For living under his rule But he loves me Can’t you see? He is the best thing for me Can’t you see I don’t want to be free? Pure white Before the fight Now we are stained red All of our innocence is dead All our innocence is dead All our innocence is dead My pen is the barrel of a gun. Remind me which side you should be on. |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
I love the title, it adds insight into the poem that you would have otherwise been able to overlook. The poem itself is powerful in its own way, very good job. |
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ponderthepoetorrsx Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284U.S , Ca |
i love it! well like it but its great even color of letters played a role yolilitzli |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
the pain is felt in this intense piece, well penned ~hugs~  Love is the life of the soul... |
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