Dark Poetry #5 |
Trying to Save Myself |
LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
If only I could make you see how much you mean to me. Then maybe you'd try to be what you could be if you set it free. Let it go, breathe it out even if you cry and shout because I can't take your pain anymore, I'm tired of cleaning your blood off the floor and I know you can be so much more. Please, open your clenched hand and give it up, you don't need to understand. All you're doing is killing yourself. Put those pills back on their self and toss the razor in the trash, you can be born new from the ash-- remains of the fire burning red and hot, pain and anger inside you caught, twisting and tearing and ripped to shreds while the misconceived thought imbeds itself into your delicate mind leaving you all alone to find some peace, some hope, some scrap of love as I watch my reflection from up above trying to make the person staring back see that I fill in what she obviously lacks. You're not alone, I try to say but she snarls, I'm not doing this-- not today. |
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ponderthepoetorrsx Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284U.S , Ca |
i can sort of relate to this in parts i really like it |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Nicely done. All we can ever do is to be supportive and help those that can not help themselves. It is definitely a cry for help we have to hear. |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
love it |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
a powerful write, well penned Love is the life of the soul... |
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