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chylenedoney
Junior Member
since 2010-10-14
Posts 27
Idaho, USA

0 posted 2011-11-10 04:11 AM





Sweet, bitter sweet memories.

Why must you haunt me so?

Why must you invade the peace of my slumber to wreake chaos upon my subconcious?

Why must you play upon my emotions like a guitarist strums a tune?

Why must you confuse and blur the lines of love, hate, fear, and anger, so I can no longer differentiate one from the others?

Just leave me be!

In Silence and in Peace!

Leave me be in my numbness!

Vanish.

Blackwidowgurl

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LaGraceLa
Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2011-12-04 04:33 PM


Lovely, elegant and meticulous in form and dicton. I love it, wonderful job!
ponderthepoetorrsx
Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284
U.S , Ca
2 posted 2011-12-07 07:42 PM


i liked it and it reminds me of a poem called admonition by Philip stack which is a personal favorite of mine

yolilitzli

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