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ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
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U.S , Ca

0 posted 2011-09-26 09:30 PM



I know not how to tell you,
The thoughts, the thoughts,
The insecurities inside,
Beneath this battered crust
Are making me go insane,
No one will ever see it can’t you see?
The days pass by too fast
My memories begin to fade
Into blurry lines
Everything just seems the same
Not worth remembering,
Everyday another failure
Leaves me standing here alone
For another day,
This feeling this darkness, is all I know,
Is all I knew until I met you,
You gave me a light to call my own
A reason to hold on,
To love, to live, to laugh
Yet no matter what I do
You fail to see,
You fail to hear,
You fail to feel
What I really want you to know.
I wish I would, I wish I could
Say it at least before I left
But what would be the point of that?
So ill hold on to dear memory
For when night arrives to comfort me as I cry.

© Copyright 2011 richard salgado - All Rights Reserved
LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2011-12-04 04:25 PM


The truth in your words hit home. They are so honest and heartfelt that it just consumes you as you read it.
ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
Posts 284
U.S , Ca
2 posted 2011-12-07 07:44 PM


thanks i put a lot of heart into this one

yolilitzli

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