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Dark Poetry #5

i wish someone could

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

0 posted 2011-11-18 02:46 PM

i think this one is not my best one but i like it

I wish someone could
Peek into my heart
Right now,
And see how I feel.
Comprehend
How I feel.-
No one can
Comprehend me
No one can see!
Everyone is the same
Everyone is oblivious!
Why can’t they see?
Why can’t they comprehend?
Is it really that hard!-
People think they know me.
But they don’t
People think they comprehend me.
BUT THEY DON’T.
AND THEY NEVER WILL…-
What can I do to make you comprehend?
What can I do to make you see how I feel?
What can I…..do?-
Because I thought that you would comprehend?
I thought you would be different.
But instead you’re just like them!-
Why is it so hard to convey my feelings?
Why is it so difficult to get through you?
Why is it so difficult to get through people?
Why? Why? Why? Oh why?-
No matter how much I convey my feelings.
No matter how much I write.
No matter how much I organize my thoughts to you.
Yet you still don’t apprehend.-
Why?-
You don’t know
How much it hurts deep inside!
You don’t know
How much I’m suffering inside!
You just don’t know!-
I just wish someone could
Peek into my heart
And see how I feel
Touch my heart and
See how I feel.
Look into my eyes
And see how I feel.-
But I know that no one will!
They never will!
And you never will!

LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

1 posted 2011-12-04 04:43 PM

So angry and upset, yet so stunning and composed. I look forward to more of your poems, they get better and better

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

2 posted 2011-12-04 04:57 PM

thank you i love yours too but i havent seen a new one yet i read everyone one of yours

ponderthepoetorrsx
Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

3 posted 2011-12-07 06:54 PM

thats exactly how i feel

yolilitzli

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

4 posted 2011-12-07 07:24 PM

thank you

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