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maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx

0 posted 2011-11-02 01:53 PM



Why do I have dark circles under my eyes?
You ask!
Why do I look pallid?
You ask!
Why is my hair messy?
You ask!
Why do I look haggard?
You ask!
Well do you want to know?
Why!?
Then I will tell you.
Why!?
I don’t get up from my bed
All I do is lay down.
Instead I cry and weep
This may be the cause of my dark circles!?-
I barely eat
I have no appetite
I’m loosing my color.
This may be the cause of me becoming pallid!?-
I don’t comb my hair
I wear disheveled clothes
Why should I groom myself?
This may be the cause that my hair is messy!?
I’m exhausted
I don’t have any energy inside of me
I’m all worn out
As the days are going by
I don’t want to get up from my bed.
This may be the cause of me becoming haggard!?-
Are you happy now?
That I told you
Are you happy now?
With my depressing life!
Because with your expression
I can see how happy you are
With your life.-
Can you share some of that happiness with me?
Can you….?
Or are you just going to pity me?-
Well thanks for asking
Because you are the only
One
That actually cares!

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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2011-11-06 08:44 PM


This one is my favorite of yours. I'm not sure why, but this poems fits with me, it makes perfect sence and clicks in my mind. I love it, nothing more to say
maddorani
Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
2 posted 2011-11-07 01:46 AM


thank you i'm glad you loved it
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