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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
Why do I have dark circles under my eyes? You ask! Why do I look pallid? You ask! Why is my hair messy? You ask! Why do I look haggard? You ask! Well do you want to know? Why!? Then I will tell you. Why!? I don’t get up from my bed All I do is lay down. Instead I cry and weep This may be the cause of my dark circles!?- I barely eat I have no appetite I’m loosing my color. This may be the cause of me becoming pallid!?- I don’t comb my hair I wear disheveled clothes Why should I groom myself? This may be the cause that my hair is messy!? I’m exhausted I don’t have any energy inside of me I’m all worn out As the days are going by I don’t want to get up from my bed. This may be the cause of me becoming haggard!?- Are you happy now? That I told you Are you happy now? With my depressing life! Because with your expression I can see how happy you are With your life.- Can you share some of that happiness with me? Can you….? Or are you just going to pity me?- Well thanks for asking Because you are the only One That actually cares! |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
This one is my favorite of yours. I'm not sure why, but this poems fits with me, it makes perfect sence and clicks in my mind. I love it, nothing more to say  |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
thank you i'm glad you loved it |
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