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| Dark Poetry #5 |
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Cycle of Hatred |
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Angels Fall Junior Member
since 2011-10-31
Posts 11United States |
Anger overcomes a soul It shatters, blown away by the winds of despair Like a fiery flame it burns with hate Hate is like a poison It clouds the mind Driving one insane Hate leads to bloodshed And that only breeds more hate It's like a virus Anyone can catch it It's the darkness that surrounds the world Lurking... Waiting... The cycle of hatred is never ending |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
Again, this is a wonderful poem but it could be improved by something as simple as a few punctuations. I love the concept behind it and you captured it perfectly. |
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