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i should be afraid
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i should be afraid |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
I should be afraid of trusting others. But I’m not. I should be afraid of betrayal. But I’m not. I should be afraid of conflicts, dramas, and rumors. But I’m not. I should be afraid. I should be afraid. I should be afraid. I should be afraid of what people think of me. But I’m not. I should be afraid of darkness. But I’m not. I should be afraid of being isolated. But I’m not. I should be afraid. I should be afraid. I should be afraid. I should be afraid of being alone. But I’m not. I should be afraid of being abandoned. But I’m not. I should be afraid of getting hurt. But I’m not. I should be afraid. I should be afraid. I should be afraid. I shouldn’t be afraid. I shouldn’t be afraid. I shouldn’t be afraid. Should I be afraid? Should I be afraid? Should I be afraid? I shouldn’t be afraid? I shouldn’t be afraid? I shouldn’t be afraid? But I am in fact afraid- Because my heart Is afraid and every Time my heart Whimpers and cries My heart wails and lies Even though it’s putting A brave front it’s in fact A scaredy cat in real life |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
Well written, even if it is a little repetitive- but it gets the point across- and slow. It makes you think about what you hide from others and what you may even hide from yourself. |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
hehe thanks i wanted to make it repetitive though its like a psychological poem |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
and thanks |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
I get why its repeatitive, its because you are trying to convince yourself isn't it? That if you say it a no. of times, you may actually start believing it. That is how I interpreted it. Am I right?? |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
yeah because i am still afraid  |
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