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maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx

0 posted 2011-09-25 01:21 PM


this poem was inspired by demons inside

As I wake up
I feel myself
Against the hot,
Scorching wall-
I look at my
Hands and legs being
Locked up with dark
Brown, black cuffs as
I Try to budge I
Can’t get them out-
Then I look at
My surroundings
I see all these
Deviant creatures
That I have never
Seen before
I ask myself
Where am I?
What are these things?
What can I do to get out of here?-
Then I realize
That I am in the depths of hell
And slowly the demons
Are approaching me
I see them with their
Torch lighted up
Shining and illuminating
Through the dark horrid area
As they come towards me
They unlock my cuffs
And they give me
A glass of fire to drink
As I drink the glass of fire
I feel different-
The fire didn’t burn my throat
The fire didn’t kill me
Instead I wanted more and more
So I drank more and more-
The demons are just looking at me
With their perky eyes-
As I drank the last glass of fire
I look at myself
And see that my face complexion
Has changed
My hands became dark fiery color
My fingers became long with red bloody nails
My arms became hairy
My legs became big beast’s feet
And my face turned dark maroon/red color
And my hair turned into fire
Slowly, slowly I’m being engulfed,
And being devoured by Satan itself
I’m no longer me instead there is
Someone inside of me
And slowly I am disappearing
Away and becoming the
Demons leader-
And now I know that I can’t
Be free because I have been
Completely vanished and my
Existence became something else

© Copyright 2011 madiha - All Rights Reserved
priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
Posts 216
india
1 posted 2011-10-09 11:25 AM


This is such a picturesque and vivid description! I can literally imagine the scenes in my head! nice write!
maddorani
Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
2 posted 2011-10-09 01:10 PM


thank you
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