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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
Roses are red, violets are blue, Mine are all mixed up, as I lay here still adoring you. My violets are red, my roses are blue, My heart aches silently as your light shines through. I'll be the first to cry. You are the comet that lights the sky. Stopping the tear is impossible. Just let it flow its possible. Let it go, I owe you a trick up the sleeve, Because you made me first believe. My violets are red, my roses are blue, The lonely tear is gone, But it fell gently just for you. |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
The twist you had on the whole "roses are red" thing was quite interesting. I am actually pretty fond of your little poem, it has a certain charm to it. |
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